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Trails Through the Trees by *twilight-apple:icontwilight-apple:



the mist trails through the trees
like fingers through my hair,
ice cold wind pushes against my chest
as I fight my way through the forest,
trying to escape the darkness.

silence follows my footsteps,
no branches breaking underneath me
and no animals rustling
except for the owl and her echoing
screech through the forest.

the darkness follows me at every turn,
winding around my wrists,
wrapping around my neck,
pulling me back into the mist that
trails through the trees.
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i'm not quite sure why i'm in this mood. maybe i need to work out all the wierd and spooky crap before i write some ItM.

listening to "This Conversation is Over" by Alesana while writing this.

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:icondarcknyt:
Weird and spooky is good. :) I'm going to try and make a living on it. ;)

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JDT :batman:
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:icontwilight-apple:
i do like weird and spooky, but sometimes i think i don't pull it off well enough in prose. poetry's good when i just want to write something and have it be quick and dirty.

you do great weird and spooky. :clap:

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lindsay e. :plotting:
Into the Moonlight: Vol. I and II | Writing Goober
:icondarcknyt:
Aw, you're so sweet, even when you're in a funk. :) :hug:

You do prose just fine, sweetie. I've not seen you try spooky and/or weird, but I bet you do just fine. :)

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JDT :batman:
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Now faith is the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen. -Heb. 11:1
:icontwilight-apple:
well, if i did spooky and/or weird i think i'd get notes of 'are you doing okay?'

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lindsay e. :plotting:
Into the Moonlight: Vol. I and II | Writing Goober
:icondarcknyt:
Unless your artist's comments indicated you felt like doing spooky/weird, right? Hm? ;)

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JDT :batman:
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Now faith is the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen. -Heb. 11:1
:icontwilight-apple:
that too. :D

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lindsay e. :plotting:
Into the Moonlight: Vol. I and II | Writing Goober
:icondarcknyt:
;)

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JDT :batman:
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Now faith is the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen. -Heb. 11:1
:icondenlm:
Gave me a chill. And that is a compliment.
:icontwilight-apple:
:clap: yay!

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lindsay e. :plotting:
Into the Moonlight: Vol. I and II | Writing Goober

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